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For days and days i have been walking,
always talking to the trees.

My friends are no longer close to my house,
Why did i have to part.

So long i have been lonely,
feeling my heart tear apart.

The loneliness is the only thing that completes me.
When i walk here in the dark.
The silent whisperings of the leafs in the wind.
The chilled hand of frost that rubs over my spine.
They all make me shiver when i'm here alone,so alone in the dark.

I cry out for help,
for someone to take my hand.
But there is nobody there,i'm all alone in this park.
I fall down on my knees,i can feel my eyes filling with tears.
My heart drowning in my fears.

Cause i'm alone,
so alone in the dark,
walking in a park,
so cold,so alone,
so full of fear,
no friends near.

I walk to the only thing that shines,
the lake so devine.

I take my rope,i tie it in a knod around my neck,
I tie the other side to the stone,
the stone that will safe me from being alone.

As i toss the stone into the lake,i can see my own reflection,
i can feel my heart break.

I'm drowning,drowning in my own fears.
I'm gone now,i now live among the others in the trees.
©2008-2009 ~ElfMuse
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Requested by : :iconthoraax:
Theme : sad emotions.

I think it turned out rather emotional.
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i am crying its so sad, i didnt think u could muster up something so quick :)
i feel so much better :)
u are truely amazing at this :)
why thank you so much.
The reason i could write something like that so fast is because i'm really emotional at times,and i write best when i'm emotional and i was emotional because of the things you said,i could feel your pain and loneliness.

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:) there is nothing much i can writing to that except thank you hun :)

:hug:
you are more then welcome

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if u are still emotional a bit maybe u could do a request about new begining :) its always nice to have a new begining with an ending :hug:
so sad :crying:

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i know,it was requested and he wanted it to be verry sad.

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-I'm nothing more but a victim of society- "ElfMuse"
-War is not the answer,only love can conquer me- "A perfect Circle"

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