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A brokenheart stopped beating.

Nobody to rely one,
Nobody who is there for you.

Only emptyness in my heart,
why is it my life that has to part?

As i walk a road away from my house,
i see broken bottles of glass.

The glass destroys my outer-self,
it's not dark and cold,like you said it felt.

I can see a scarlet red glow of my blood,
streaming down my arm as i go.

I did it,i did it,
i couldn't ease my troubled mind.

You have no idea how it felt,
to feel my heart so cold.

The heat leaves my body as the troubles leave my mind.
I can see clearly now,wat there is at the end.

As my heart beat goes slower and nearly stops,
i can see a glimpse of your face in the puddle of blood.

It's getting colder,so much colder,it's almost like it's freezing.
I can hear not much now,i can't stand up much longer,i fall on my knees,
atlast i found inner peace.

To be,or to be not.

A story has a start and an end,
i reached my last stop,goodbye my friend.
An other sad poem written by me,and no i'm not going to kill myself,i just felt like writing something like this.
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BloodyDesire Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008
Sophie, this must be one of your works I love the most.
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ElfMuse Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2008
i know,i had the same feeling when i was writing it :D
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Thoraax Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2008
i wanted to cry when i read it, it was so good the emoution overwhelmed me :) great work hun
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ElfMuse Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2008
omg,thats so sweet,Thank you so much <3
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Saint-Chaos Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2008
you could of fooled me lol, so much emotion, i love it ^^
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ElfMuse Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2008
i know it's written with emotions as usual,but it's not about me this time!
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Saint-Chaos Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2008
lol thats good.
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